Monday, 31 October 2011

THE BASIC WRITING IELTS TEST STRUCTURE P2

TOPIC : IN THE 21th CENTURY, CHILDREN WATCH A LOT OF TV. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF WHATCHING TV ? DISCUSS


INTRODUCTION :


  • Watching TV can be good & bad for children, depends on what programs they watch
  • TV can be educational
  • TV content adult scenes so that bad for children 
BODY :
PARAGRAPH 1 : TV can be educational (MAIN IDEAD)
  • TV ontain many educational programs (detail)
  • TV broadcast the lates news, keep you up to date (detail)
  • children can learn from the educational programs & news (detail)
PARAGRAPH 2 : Adult TV shows are not good for children (MAIN IDEAD)
  • violence & sex scenes not good for children.(detail)
  • Children might copy bad behaviour(detail)
PARAGRAPH 3 : WATCHINH TOO MUCH TV IS NOT GOOD FOR CHILDREN'S HEALTH AND DISRUPTS THEIR EDUCATION
  • Watching TV too long might damage eyes sight
  • children don't excercise and eat when watching TV
  • watching TV wastes time , children don't do home work.
CONCLUSION :

  • more disadvantages than advantages of watching TV
  • parents should let children watch educational programs.

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